Comments of chapter undefined of r.a.a.t.i.t.a (dropped)
r.a.a.t.i.t.a (dropped)
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i hope to see this "intruiging" "Novel" stay's afloat whilst the sea's rage with terror as tis era has forcome to us all , hopefully you won't fall off . PS: if you need help like getting idea's or whatnot try your best and make a basic structure and the laws of your "wrealm" for a few moments taking notes here and now , might help you when you ask for outside help .
Big sad... (Sorry if any of this sounds rude) The story wasn't that bad, in my opinion. The only problem I saw was you setting unrealistic goals (12 days of tankmas). It might have helped if you didn't try to force yourself to write, take it slow until you get used to writing the story. Then set a schedule and slowly increase the chapter size. It's like exercise, when you start you won't be able to keep a consistent schedule and do it for 2 hours each session. You would have to slowly get into it maybe doing 20 minutes of exercise every 7 days, yhen when yoh feel comfortable increase the amount of exercise you do. (exercise=word count, schedule=amount of days before you ulload a chapter) I hope this helps if you write a new story.
