Skully
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Lol 'blackout' in every sense of the word
Interesting
so he's black and born 03? Intresting.
great chapter!
why use the word lump
Thx
Idiot way to start but it can get better later during the novel
I like this better than most novels here. The grammar is good. The storytelling is superb. I just finished a chapter but I think this will be a good read.
hmm
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