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Comments of chapter undefined of How I Become a Flaming Turkey

ban_steal
ban_stealLv3ban_steal

I don't know man if this story is ur original or copy of some wuxia novel

TearsofThings
TearsofThingsLv5TearsofThings

Author needs to read up at least a LITTLE bit on DxD. As said before you can't challenge someone before 18. Also, they are devils, what's this nonsense about being cowards? Blacklist all of them from buying phenex tears. The end

PleasantPheasant
PleasantPheasantLv4PleasantPheasant

Uhh fairly sure there is a rule that they need to be 18 to compete in a rating game. Rias could only verse riser because it was a special occasion… also if the phenex family is one of the main houses and so influential and rich, no other devils would be dumb enough to challenge a 6 year old. That is basically asking for your entire house to be destroyed if not physically then socially.

ban_steal
ban_stealLv3ban_steal

The plot look like some 3 rate wuxia fan-fiction/martial arts

Primordial_Origin
Primordial_OriginLv2Primordial_Origin

BS for the sake of plot. Still no comment from Author. The disappointment levels up. 6 yrs old really? This would also rush the Peerage recruitment which could further push this story down the drain. Devil's care a lot about face. Who would have a face left after defeating a 6yrs old while being at least 33yrs old??? You'll pretty much loose your devil standing right there and then while also offending one of strongest, richest, and most influential family at the same time. That will be close to committing suicide...politically, economically, etc. And again, can't the father have a spine? Or at least a consistent character/behavior. I thought he is overprotective?? I Thought he wants to keep his son's power and demonic power reserve a secret??? Agreeing to the rating game even when he wins will be like practically loosing as well. The amount attention and assassination attempts he would get will be so annoying after. I'll be saving myself some time and drop this. Good luck to readers who would continue reading.

selfinsert
selfinsertLv5selfinsert

character from another universe? if yes : queen : irene belserion rock ; escanor rock : White beard or tsunade bishop : negi springfield (negima) bishop : gojo (jujutsu no kaisen) knight : arthoria (lancer version) knight : kyojuro rengoku pawn ; shiba tatsuya (irregular magic high school) pawn *3 : rou (re monster) pawn : qiqi (genshin impact) pawn : akame pawn * 2 : Scáthach familliar : pokémon

Fanfiction_writer
Fanfiction_writerLv11Fanfiction_writer

I hope unlike original Riser , mc will add some good peerage members

DRACONIAN619
DRACONIAN619Lv13DRACONIAN619

thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work

Name2486
Name2486Lv5Name2486

thanks for the chapter.

NulZilch
NulZilchLv5NulZilch

Please don't become rias bashing please don't become rias bashing Please dont become rias bashing

vicky111mudi
vicky111mudiLv5vicky111mudi

I love Rias

DARK_SAGE
DARK_SAGELv4DARK_SAGE

Keep going please 🤩👌

Azrail93
Azrail93Lv5Azrail93

Thank you for the chapter

Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

👍

MarkuzBlack
MarkuzBlackLv6MarkuzBlack

👍👍👍

kilgan
kilganLv5kilgan

good story. but I think it's hard to complete all your pieces within a year

Natanael486
Natanael486Lv4Natanael486

Thanks for the chapter

Dark_lord_shadow
Dark_lord_shadowLv5Dark_lord_shadow

thanks for the chapter. :)

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter 👍👍

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

ThanksThanksThanksThanks