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Just read first chapter. I am planning to write story related to vampire, and your story gives idea to me. Good description, especially appearance of the character. [img=recommend]
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I like the first chapter, but in my preference I would describe the character first before revealing their names. But I liked the way you did it. I will definetly be binging this book.đ€©
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