Comments of chapter undefined of In Black Clover as a SpearSaint

yh i hate Ghostyz

here we can clearly see that the Gods were really trying to kill this guy

at least we can see instant revenge to the scum before he reincarnated. other novel or fanfic don't do that. they always leave us hanging. and honestly it feels satisfying.

Broooo😢

I was using the voiceover setting in my iphone when reading this chapter and the "period""period""period""period""period""period""period" kind caught me off guard. It sounded like a girl having her period for the first time and the father is panicking not knowing what to do and he just say's period again and again lol.

lol can only escape so many times

If you want to improve the English in this story you can use grammarly. Aldo for a better improvement you'll have to pay the premium but it is good without the premium. (Just in case you want to try it)

You need a proof reader and sometimes you give useless details like "eats eggs on bacon" you could just say "he goes and eats breakfast"

To be fair it's Japan they probably do have a squadron that uses Spears and Staffs.

(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻ чё за хуйня🤬

Best fanfic I have ever read :p And I have read over over 300 fanfics and this one is my favorite

Few tips for writing. Use grammarly (That's a good program and helps a lot with commas and pontuations) Try not to change the verbal tense, sometimes it was in the present, and at other moments it was in the past. Nice prologue btw, clichê but good

Wewoo we woo sfx*patrick from bikini bottom comes

pretty generic prologue not bad 4/5

Now I won’t feel fulfilled while reading this story unless she reincarnates with him.

I really like this pls write more

Reading!?\

Ngl i kinda want that girl to go to bc with him