Comments of chapter undefined of Sorcerer...Cyborg???
Sorcerer...Cyborg???
Very_yellow_Newt
Chapter comments18
Boring! He has technology, and now, he is a genius in mana manipulation and even received two OP and rare magic affinities... talk about giving an MC every ability on a silver platter. If he had only average or even less talent and thus used that and his tech to make unique things that would have been MUCH cooler in my opinion. Where is the STRUGGLE, where is the hardship, where is the hard work? I quite had enough of MCs that receive everything from the very start.
Hello i_love_magic I really appreciate you coming back and leaving this kind comment. I would like to say however, that many of the criticisms raised by yourself and other readers are valid. To be completely honest, most of the time I agree with them. This novel was the very first thing I've ever written, and thanks to this, the early chapters are very weak. I appreciate any and all feedback, thoughts and criticisms left behind, since they are what has allowed me to be improve as a writer. Thanks :)
I_love_magic:It might have been just me that had a problem with this, it seems, as your story seems to be going quite well and gaining popularity... congratulations!
