Comments of chapter undefined of Translator vs Creator: Transmigrating in a Game
Translator vs Creator: Transmigrating in a Game
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Umu~ Thanks for showing us how mc is training and developing author, but there is something i noticed since last chapter, the lack of describing the location where MC is, for example, last chapter Natasha was following MC around but you never mentioned where they were or even where they live(I mean, do they live in the capital or in their own lands? Because that would be unrealistic how Natasha was suddenly following Ren), suddenly mc is on a forest, suddenly on a mountain and then a village, suddenly on a beach... I hope you can fix this habit and describe more the locations where is where and his movements between them.
yeah, anyone can see dark sun, and of course the blue sun. Only if they are within range, but what you said is whether big powers has the desert in their grasp, in which I said that it's not possible since no one can get close when the two suns are present unless their level is the same as Freya. But yes, I get your point. And there are a lot of types, maybe you just have not countered it. Like you said I also have read many novels with many fillers that can even be said as annoying, but like I mentioned I also encountered lots of novel that described just like the way I did.
Ancient_Egyptian:Man ... I am talking about the sun, the dark one ... Can anyone see it or It's exclusive for those near it (I can't remember if you mentioned that before) The point about OP is that he has Ferya with him so of course, he can move very fast and the need for travel is unnecessary ... Until here, I understand it very clearly and I have no problem with it ... I am just asking if you can use their travel for something else like mini-event or just instead of jumping between two places you can describe the travel even if a little for the sake of making the chapters flow smoothly. Also, I don't think I read many novels' that barely describe anything... most of the authors use every part of the story to stretch the chapters and use more words and some even use fillers in such an irritating way... For example, a normal author will use these ~30 chapters to write a ~ 100 chapters and those annoying authors can make 200 chapters just of fillers and unnecessary stuff. So my point is that can you make an equilibrium between your method of writing and the typical way? In both cases, the novel itself is good and enjoyable.. (I only come here on a web novel to read the chapter of the day and leave for the past 3 days.) so don't misunderstand my request. have a good day.đđ
