Comments of chapter undefined of Translator vs Creator: Transmigrating in a Game
Translator vs Creator: Transmigrating in a Game
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Umu~ Thanks for showing us how mc is training and developing author, but there is something i noticed since last chapter, the lack of describing the location where MC is, for example, last chapter Natasha was following MC around but you never mentioned where they were or even where they live(I mean, do they live in the capital or in their own lands? Because that would be unrealistic how Natasha was suddenly following Ren), suddenly mc is on a forest, suddenly on a mountain and then a village, suddenly on a beach... I hope you can fix this habit and describe more the locations where is where and his movements between them.
Natasha's lasted a week, while Ren's two. OP? I don't really understand what that means Original post? overpowered đ? Well, and you are saying that was my reason, maybe it is I just didn't know it's called OP. No one can get close to the sun unless they have future knowledge, or their strength rivaled Freya's or that of a god/goddess. Even Claire herself with a lot of preparation would only barely make it half way. So the problem is the distance, right? proper description of the place's distance? I mean I never thought it was vague and underwhelming because I had read a lot of novels with similar format regarding this, and I have no qualms about it. But I guess different people, different opinion. I'll try to fit in as much as I can manage and put your suggestions in mind.
Ancient_Egyptian:Didn't this event at the dessert is a whole month? what is the chance that no one will notice two suns in the sky? or is this region of the event unaccessible for other than them? also I just asked that you don't use his OP as excuse for this, we aren't taking about how impossible for him to do that easily, No we are talking about how vague and underwhelming for us to read it like that ... Afterall we are reading a novel not a diary so jumping between the events without any minor events to connect them is super hard to swallow. so please add descriptions as much as you see good and please make mid-events and fillers for more chapters instead of dealing with it as raw draft and we should understand the hidden meaning behind it. Thanks for replying. đ
