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Comments of chapter undefined of Translator vs Creator: Transmigrating in a Game

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Pedro_Sousa
Pedro_SousaLv15Pedro_Sousa

Umu~ Thanks for showing us how mc is training and developing author, but there is something i noticed since last chapter, the lack of describing the location where MC is, for example, last chapter Natasha was following MC around but you never mentioned where they were or even where they live(I mean, do they live in the capital or in their own lands? Because that would be unrealistic how Natasha was suddenly following Ren), suddenly mc is on a forest, suddenly on a mountain and then a village, suddenly on a beach... I hope you can fix this habit and describe more the locations where is where and his movements between them.

XxEagleNightxX
XxEagleNightxXAuthorXxEagleNightxX

I admit that I never truly put a name to the place he vested in. I only put it as the Capital city, his home, forest, beach... And about the desert how is it normal that big power take it under their protection? To begin with if not for the event there would be no Two suns. So of course it's normal for him to go there, it was just an ordinary desert in the knowledge of many people, but because he knows that, that desert is the place where the event takes place, so that's why the desert is considered special for only those who have knowledge, like Ren and Natasha. Wasn't it described that the event would start, and there was even a countdown. When the event have not yet started those 2 different colored sun didn't exist. Big powers won't put there eyes on the desert. I said black flames developed into a dark sun. These words will give the meaning that this black flame existed through time and then turned to a black sun. But However it was not, I haven't truly explained because that defeats the purpose of the mystery about this world. Was it truly a game? Why does his mistranslation affect it? Did the world really follow the original? It's not even canon yet, I can't just reveal the answer to this questions. And the Sense of distance, I didn't describe it with detail because I thought there was no need to. He have Claire and Freya to fly him over, in just a few seconds. About Natasha following him easily. She is quite powerful now for goodness sake, and especially with how her concealment is described. It's a fact that it would be easy for her to come and go to Ren's home.

Ancient_Egyptian:I don't know if you get what he means or not but I will try to put my understanding just in case. Mr.author you never described the world in details(At least this what I remember) even his home town is poorly described and the majority of the locations he vested is without a famous name for it ... also you never mentioned the distance between two locations or at least the direction... It's always give the feeling that he just goes to his backyard every time he visit an event's location, for example he visit a desert with two suns as if it's something normal to visit (Because the normal is that some big power take this part under their protection) also he followed by the FL as if it's easy for them to meets but you don't mentioned how far thier homes from each other. and many things like that. (Also don't use the OP excuse for the lake of details about his destinations). Good luck👍
kamehgahskiida
kamehgahskiidaLv11kamehgahskiida

nice timeskip let's see the development, can't wait to see the villainess and heroine. Most of the time i like the decisive or cunning villainess more than the heroic heroine. TYFTC!

IMightBeGod
IMightBeGodLv3IMightBeGod

I love this keep up the good work

Khirodra
KhirodraLv4Khirodra

thnx

RvH
RvHLv6RvH

Thanks!

Reaper_210
Reaper_210Lv5Reaper_210

Thanks for the chapter

Sagely_pervert
Sagely_pervertLv4Sagely_pervert

thanks for the chapter 😊