Comments of chapter undefined of Translator vs Creator: Transmigrating in a Game
Translator vs Creator: Transmigrating in a Game
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Umu~ Thanks for showing us how mc is training and developing author, but there is something i noticed since last chapter, the lack of describing the location where MC is, for example, last chapter Natasha was following MC around but you never mentioned where they were or even where they live(I mean, do they live in the capital or in their own lands? Because that would be unrealistic how Natasha was suddenly following Ren), suddenly mc is on a forest, suddenly on a mountain and then a village, suddenly on a beach... I hope you can fix this habit and describe more the locations where is where and his movements between them.
hmm, okay. I guess I'm quite different in understanding, I can imagine things pretty well when I'm reading even if the description is not that detailed. Like for example, I said that the place of the Moon's Blessing was at a mountain somewhere outside the capital. And Ren said that his place is close, so it is expected that he lives on their own land. Since they were hunting bandits, of course Natasha and Ren would be together at places like the road where the transport carriages are at. As it is common knowledge that they are a lot bandits there. If we are talking about training, then it should be grass lands or some forest. And if we are talking about because beach, of course, it's the sea.
