Will he abandon everything he built to go north and live as a mercenary? Do you think that ned Stark, the honorable idiot, is going to ally himself with him? Does not make sense! And who will be your loving partner?
the loot from Valerie was totally weak and the only set of armor he found he's going to give away... and now he leaves a baby dragon alone to go do some irrelevant bs in the north. the whole train of thought for that is so convoluted it makes no sense and any idiot could see through the lie....
Thanks for the Chapter I'm enjoying your Work
Though the only complaint, I would have is that I have a hard time believing that your MC and his family are Stark. They just don't feel like Starks to me.
Anyway, keep up the good work.