Rak_MTL
I don’t think that the gramm is bad it fully adopts to Fukagu’s character
Amazing story. Just need little editing overall I m hooked to this story. Awesome timeline. keep up the good work
this needs a lot of editing, I struggle reading this. it's a great plot and wish I could read this more coherently
This is machine translated isnt it?
So the timeline is right after tobirama's death, right?
The story is good but the translation is bad
Nice chapter
ThanksThanks
Thanks for the chapter
Dude I can help with the English if you want … holla me
gracias por el cap