Author, I think youāre doing an excellent job of going back and forth from past to present. I feel the various emotions of Loriel looking back at the past...I feel for the past Elise too and what she must have went through. It makes the story so intriguing...
I love it so far!
Loving Elise for Maxim. Though I feel a little sad for Elise at first but as the story starts to unfold everything is making more and more sense and coming together beautiful. You're doing great author šš
I'm so glad he's not in love with Em! Originally I thought he was going to come back in TCP and try to take Em away from Mars. Now, I know he's not ššš
Iām loving the story! I donāt have as much time to read because i returned to work but Iām enjoying the audio with the male voice! And itās not confusing at all. Your doing a great job šš¼