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pretty good, some minor edits might fix the grammar problems
thank you đ I'm sorry for the grammar because English isn't my first language đ maybe i will edit it in the future
So far do good. I like the book.
good plot. you should focus more on tense and grammar. the writing was slow and half of it was info dumps. I'd suggest giving certain info gradually.
pretty good, skme minor edits might fix the grammar problems
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