1Little_Tree
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So far do good. I like the book.
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pretty good, some minor edits might fix the grammar problems
good plot. you should focus more on tense and grammar. the writing was slow and half of it was info dumps. I'd suggest giving certain info gradually.
pretty good, skme minor edits might fix the grammar problems
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