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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Jims_Rid
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Author, you did a good job. I have a suggestion though. I noticed that everything so far has been under control. Every impossible moment, the MC has a sure fire way to survive so while he has been put under pressure, he hasn't overcome any impossible moment so far so it might be a good idea to let the mc experience moments of desperation. His fighting style makes it so that he can be aggressive and retreat all the time so I understand that it would be difficult to put the MC in that kind of situation unless he's facing the likes of Nagato, Obito, and Madara. I would say that your work is one of the best fanfics so far, on par with Outsider's resolve but as long as you can pull it off with another character or characters other than Itachi madara obito nagato or even reanimated hashirama or minato, I would say that your work would be the best so far. But it's okay since your work is still one of the best so far. Anyway, it's just a suggestion

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Lucifer_4life666
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was rewatching flash s5 finale where Thawne killed the guards in his prison and thought it fit fujin with his wind domain. If he mentors some students and is surrounded by enemies he just says "gentlemen I hate to Inform you... but you're already dead" then kills them immediately with his wind domain. Just a passing thought

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TheSwordInTheNovel
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Nice chapter, we finally met the root trainees

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Interesting_Okay
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Thank you author sama

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Zero93
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Thanks for chapter

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EvilPenguin_666
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DaoistQFOCnW
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tftc

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DORO_SAMA
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Thanks for the chapter

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NaQB40X
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thanks for the chapter

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scarletking001
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thanks for the chapter great as always 😁 😊 ❤️ 💓 💖 💯

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papajka
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thanks for the chapter

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LittleVamp
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Thanks for the chapter Author 🙂

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Sam0207
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Thanks for the chapter 😁😁

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MeyingLirong
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Thanks for the chapter

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Josan1995
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an epic battle is going be happening!!

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GuYueFangYuan
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Kortar
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More Names, oh no! Thank you

AvidReader962
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Another great chapter, thanks

Banane64_Yan
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Thanks for the Chapter

MMEStudio
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Ty for the chapter

J_DIAZ
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author this chapt you gave us yesterday what's about a new chapt, or today not new chapt