Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Devil_Hex
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Hey, author-san how did you make this story so interesting?, I did understand that according to Fujin's nature him having no inherent advantages made him normal, so no overpowered mc, or more like mc is best in his age group but still faces challenges as ninja world doesn't care about age, so there is that, You started with academy arc and people usually doesn't like that so you kept it short yet effective, exploring some possibilities and created or took away the testing system which was also a bit detailed... next up let's talk about sensei, you chose a elite jounin... which is okay I guess as it meant that he had a person who had a lot of info for Fujin to give and the Senju taijutsu style is also a cherry on top with sword techniques, I won't be surprised if this character was made to give Mc some of his skills of the desired subset you have thought about... then you got carried away and made him op in one way?, okay I think I am starting to talk weird in that direction, so let's move on, he trained them... okay?, then we also have dynamic between Hiruzen and Fujin which you have wonderfully did, his reactions does make it fun as they are not continuous and in between arcs, then next comes Team mates, you choose a dead Uchiha and a slave ... coz why not?, at least he was cool enough to not become too close with them, as that would mean No massacre or delayed massacre or Danzo massacre.. okay the last one would have been fun to read but this would mean plot gone wrong which would need to be done carefully and lot of work but yes, that is an interesting route to see, then we have Chunin exams, Bandit extermination is also bolded part as earlier parts of his genin life, then comes training by hokage himself... lol Homura or was it the other elder I forgot the name, Fujin really should gift him something... also the story do have interesting missions too which serves as entertainment, giving depth to characters and also gives us idea about Fujin's current abilities, then his life as Chunin, which I won't delve in deeper as It's getting too lengthy, but I could get some idea how author is making his story interesting... a little, I think I am onto the secrets of makings of this story, ... Anbu life which was skipped, probably as missions won't be too interesting and boring, plus author wanted the next arc which was starting the war with Suna , for that MC needed to have elite jounin prowess which these years did provide... somewhat, ... People even started making counterattacks against him which was fun and realistic too, plus battle with Roshi was interesting as well, .... I won't go further as I am wondering why I am even typing all this ... sigh, either way, I have one question Author-san, from where did you get inspirations of all these ideas?.. is it just spending time over all those tropes to make something original ?? or just random inspiration from something?... PS- I don't think anybody would have read this, if you did... I won't complete that, do that on your own
