Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Devil_Hex
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Even tho i really like your detailed and slow paced story, even for me a couple of chapters became too stalling like literally: 1 chapter talk with hiruzen about mission,2nd chapter STILL talk with hiruzen about leaving anbu,3rd chapter hiruzen talks with shikaku,4th chapter naruto and fujin eats ramen,5th chapter fujin walks back home and threatens root ninja,6th chapter we get danzo dialog about fujin walking back to home and mcs starting training FTG, now we got chapter about fujin showing one jutsu to naruto with inner monolog that we all already know about. To me it could be included in half chapters amount that we got. I as a reader can shut an eye on that because we get a regulard updates 1 per each day and even tho i know that you as an author got at least 50+ chapters done ahead, in future IF i may suggest is to reduce mcs obvious inner talk and give us readers more events, since now i am just already skipping him talking to himself and just read dialogs since mc returned to konoha and i loose nothing by that still knowing his motives. Either way thank you for your work and can't wait for another chapter.
CRUZEN:You wrote something totally irrevelant that supposed to make fun of me wihout refering to any point what i meant. By following your steps and not typing anything else i will say that you should invest and read a grammar dictionary, so you could learn how to start a sentence with a capital letter. There is no need for me to continue this "discussion" with someone like you. I gave my honest opinion about few last chapters to the author that he doesn't need to bother with if thats what he wants to. Unlike you that no matter what someone types about thing you like, it can ONLY be something positive one. Otherwise your lower cheeks starts to hurt to the point, that you need to share about it with the others. Thats all for you and others like you.
Nunca entenderĂ© porque la gente dice que fujin es un miedoso a la hora de no hacer cosas que claramente no es el momento, con Juzo de que no lo mataba y no iba con todo, al final lo mato y fue bastante bien. Y siento que con naruto pasarĂĄ un poco lo mismo porque fujin no lo tomarĂĄ como discĂpulo ante todos, naruto en este momento es un caos por su horrible enseñanza de otros y si lo entrena enserio el tipo fĂĄcilmente podrĂĄ ser un JunĂn hecho y derecho que si hace eso los cambios serĂĄn algo quĂ© fujin no podrĂĄ aprovechar bien, lo mejor es solo arreglar lo malo enseñar cosa bĂĄsicas de control elemental y control de chakra junto un poco de taijustsu.