Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Monarch: Dragon's Will Manifestation
Dragon Monarch: Dragon's Will Manifestation
QueenDragoness
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This first chapter is really amazing... Well written, without word fillers and with an impressive description of the MC's state... However, I'm not sure if I am the only one that felt it like this but when you described her relationship with Winter... It seemed really out of place... I mean, reading the first part sent shivers down my spine as I felt like I was there accompanying Blaze during her descent from the mountain and discovery of the massacreā¦ while when you described her relationship with Winter, it felt like I was here in my room listening to an author that explained Blaze's backstory... Let's just say that I think it would have been better to give us less information about her relationship and let us guess what was going onā¦ As I said, maybe I am the only one that noticed it or I am simply imagining thingsā¦ Anyway, I really liked this first chapter, I can't wait to read the next one : )
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