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Comments of chapter undefined of My King System

Hikmet
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Good story

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Kiiara
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No matter how kind and patient a person is, at some point, they will snap if pushed too far. I understand tht Yuki is still young but he should've not raised his voice even if he dislikes the situation. It's not possible that he didn't notice how hard-working her mother was, but most importantly, he must've noticed that he didn't have a 'father'. That should already be a strong enough hint for him to notice their family situation. So, I'm pro mother in this chapter

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Nr_Yet1208
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decent start but maybe focus on who's saying the dialogue? it can get a little confusing

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CodeyVanilla
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Interesting 🧐 . Lets move

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Sweetdreamer20
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Well written 👏

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Ready_Villains
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Hmm interesting go on

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Sidis
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nice chapter

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Williane_M_P
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wow! gostei!