ThirtyTyrants
I really like how you wrote the dad character here.made me a bit emotional. Like just because Ys made it,the broken relationship would not be mended with a simple sorry. Made it a bit more realistic unlike in movies where the 'bad characters' get a five minute redemption arc. Really love how you connected all things from the flashbacks of past life to knowing the identity of the the author (most Ppl would have forgotten already). It's really good, appreciate your work đđ»