Comments of chapter undefined of Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game
Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game
Saubi1234
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some criticism: - Why is his past life not enought? why does he have to get the most op talent? - She is a world class hacker and programmer? and she is it because she loves science? thats a bit stupid. I wouldnt be surprised if it turned out she was a world class Chemist and Physicist as well
Iâll be honest with you. Even without a deeper meaning, this is just a brilliant parenting move (for someone as rich as she is, I would never expect a parent to take out a loan for a situation like this). Just, being a supportive parent and trusting your child who is almost an adult to make a big decision like this that theyâre so clearly passionate about in the learning safety of your own home is priceless. Especially since she made it fairly clear that this is basically coming out of what she set aside as his inheritance, and gave him the option to back out if he wanted to keep the money for something else in the future, while also making it pretty clear he wasnât blowing his whole inheritance. 10/10 adore this woman.
I hope this start is not indicative of the rest of the novel. I don't mind a little bit of lucky mc plot development or some small plotholes to start a story but you can also overdo it and the start so far is very much overdoing it. If this is meant to set the tone than it's sort of okay (I still think it is better to slowly guide your readers into the more outlandish stuff than to just throw them into the deep end but that's a matter of taste) but if the rest of the novel is not that outlandish than this start really doesn't do the novel any favors. I would rather have a corny start where the mc has to complete a skill challenge and getting the primordial body that way. I'm sure that story wise there are good reasons to have the mc start with a golden spoon but why is it necessary that the whole family seem more like the bad guys you see early on in cultivation stories, you know the young masters and family who get face slapped by the mc (family of the mc don't have to be saints but making them look like villains is going too far, unless they are villains but than it becomes a totally different kind of story lol)
Interesting how the protagonist's aunt obtained her wealth, reflects the reality, in my country, without exception, the richest women obtained their riches with the death or separation of their husbands. the aunt gave 250 million? What is the reason? intuition?, inclusion of the protagonist's heritage? very doubtful. the story is too telluric for my taste, I just feel sorry for the protagonist in that environment.
