Comments of chapter undefined of THE UNDISPUTED ONE

So far the only thing that I may have struggled with with the story is the red eyes, but that's not bad, other than that I really enjoy the story and the characters. I like the progression of the story and the characters growth. My only hope is now that you have the foundation of the book down let the story speak for itself, don't over think it too much, but still keep true to what you have already written.

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