Comments of chapter undefined of Titanomachy
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Thanks for the really long chapter. Is the doctor planning on telling them about the tumors? Personally, I don’t like the terms ‘Alpha’ and ‘Beta’ energies. I get what they symbolize in this book but I feel like you could’ve used other terms. Just my opinion and it doesn’t really bother me.
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The words 'Alpha' and 'Beta' are more of a reference to the alpha and beta particles from physics rather than the other meanings behind them but it does kind of work both ways maybe that will help you feel a bit better about it. Some terms are meant to be changed which will actually be part of the plot later in the story.