Comments of chapter undefined of Child Of Hanma
Child Of Hanma
Starr_Dakota
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nikita_vdovinLv1nikita_vdovin
I liked your work, the way it goes. It's just not entirely clear who our main character is. That San Hanma - yes, but the rest?.. And also, is it his son and his wife?) It was especially cute and I would like to see Yujiro's reaction to the fact that he became a grandfather)))
Starr_DakotaAuthorStarr_Dakota
I'd say it more follows Yuji and his family rather than just Yuji alone and I'm not totally sure how I'd have Yujiro react just yet because you know how that man is. The only real issue I'm having with this story is I set up Jack and Yuji fighting and Jack doesn't give up so trying to figure out how far to take it is boggling me.