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i really like the revised, it makes the story smooth now [img=recommend]
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Excuse me but this doesnt seem revised A lot if grammar mistakes
the first chapter felt like a speed up version of vampire story with a twist that was the impression it gave me (no disrespect man)
really good start can't wait to read more
