nishidurani
so far so good but the description is not smooth enough it could do better to leave a better first impression but aver aLL great start đđđ
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Ăocuklu serileri daha çok seviyorum. Seri biraz ilerlesin. 20-30 bölĂŒm. O zaman baĆlarım tekrar.
The characters name are good but it would be more good if you could give a bit brief description of their physique and appearance or you did that in later chapters?
I so loved this chapter! Got me hooked.
why can't i vote?
wow she came back with her memory then who is she supposed to save?
