Anit666
Ok that thing was definitely the deal breaker for me. We are told that the mc was the top existence but then this thing pops in and starts spewing about how there are higher being that can make the mc so vulnerable in his very soul “space” and that he is a chess piece . It just really irked me waaaay to much . So im stopping here. Thank you for the story , it was fun to read till now .
Anit666:Kinda late in saying this, but the essence of this chapter is that Samur, eith his whimsical actions, has become involved in something far greater than he 'expected'; an eternal GAME. And in this game, it is up to Samur, i.e., it is Samur right and within his capabilities to DECIDE whether he wants to be a pawn or th Game master. And as Samur says, he'll choose what he finds the most amusing. Also, I'm not sure how you got the idea of there being higher beings that could destroy Samur.
Okay so..I started to read this novel with a thought of 'just to burn some time then drop it off due to unusual writing style'. At first, it's rea~lly weird that MC's inner monologue and rants are popping left and right after interaction with characters. But there's this unexplainable force that kept me from reading through it, like, the more I read the more It attracts my attention. I'm glad I didn't drop it on first chapter! I think this is a really good story.