Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel's Sun Wukong

Thanks for the chapter

Keep Going And Thank's For The Chapter And I Hope You Have A Good Day To <3

I mean the story so far is okay. But the way you write is a complete mess. It's so hard to understand. Feels like a 6 year old child wrote it. The punctuation is a disaster by itself. It's hard to understand the dialogues. As a reader it's upto us to figure out which ones are dialogues and which ones aren't. Otherwise it's okay. I suggest you use grammarly dear author.

thx for the chap

K im done. 98% of this is just copy and paste of the script from the movie. The remaining 2% is the MC turned background character, who follows the story as if he’s simply in the audience. I wouldn’t be surprised if he doesn’t save Loki from his fall off the rainbow bridge for one reason or another.