Fixten
Just wanted to list some thoughts so far. I really enjoyed reading the battle scenes. Simple, neat and helps convey the fight. I'm sure it'll get messier once fireballs and other types of flashy attacks come in but besides that I'm hoping the dialogue and also internal monologue improves. It's not bad but I wouldn't necessarily say it's great either but it's okay hopefully it'll improve before chapter 100. Do like what you're trying to do and I hope you keep at it Author!