Comments of chapter undefined of ODYSSEY OF A DREAMER
ODYSSEY OF A DREAMER
the_fallen
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Maybe try to re write it? it started off so good, I think about chapter 8 is where it all started to go in the wrong direction, plus the date of the setting, you should have started it at maybe 2003, so you don't have to make it all up like you would it you started at 2021
the_fallenAuthorthe_fallen
Hmmm. For a while now, I have been wondering where I did go wrong with this book. Thought about rewriting it. I’ll try doing as you say. I think I will rewrite from chapter 9. And also change the timeline. But give me a week or two to see if i can come up with a storyline that can go a long way. I really appreciate it that you still haven’t given up on this book of mine 🥹🥹 this is encouraging 😫
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