Comments of chapter undefined of Magic School: My Students Are Too Arrogant!

I get the feeling this chapter would make a bit more sense if the author wasn't trying to cram every possible future plot point into it.

what???

Hmm...

The author should learn the right way of story progression, too much information in this chapter. The author is giving the backstory, but miserably fail to meet the standard, due to cramming of plots. (For example, the worldview, due to cramming the author forgot that he/she written that there are 4 continents, but told only 3 and omitted 1. He also didn't told the societal structure of any continents.) The advice to the author is to rewrite the chapter or the novel and READ other novels to improve his/her writing. Take note that 'Writing to only meet the quotas, but the content is not up to the standard is only a trash.' And the only outcome is to rewrite it again, when it is already published is utterly nuisance and annoying. Hopefully the writer improve more.

I feel like this story gonna be boring to read...

iam confused, and I have lost my interest in it

I thing it is okey

So do all his students have the log in system or something to get stronger?

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Dropped.

I think it was a good chapter just not well explained