Comments of chapter undefined of World of Beasts: I Can See Their Hidden Stats!

where is his new talent after the advancement how did he advance the pet with a missing ingredient

is it just me or did this chapter seem like it was wrote by somebody completely different

I'll be honest if you're gonna change something like an ability late in a story. You should probably go back and change it so that everything matches otherwise you are just gonna have a bunch of confused readers. You also seem to have forgotten that he was missing 1 item for the Fire elemental. As well as he had sold 46ish out of 60 eggs at his auction and then later he somehow still has the same amount left to sell online? You have a great story going for you but please go back and edit your chapters.

if you can keep reading after this train wreck. I salute you. but I can no longer turn my brain off and read this trash.

This is where i’ll leave. way too many changes to what was originally said. i cant follow a story that does not bother to be consistent. it had great potential. but author really screwed it.

this chapter was seems to be written in a hurry... and please put some sentences into one paragraph that should be put, especially the said conversation... its annoying and confusing to read from the supposed one person, but separated by a few paragraphs.. tq

So many plot holes...

isn't the skyfire illusion can change into any weapon, but why spear only?, is the author had a short term memory loss or just a dumb one?

The number of internal inconsistencies continues to pile up making it hard to enjoy reading this story. internal plot rationality is critical to maintaining pacing, the errors cause the reader to mentally stumble and loose interest.

would appreciate it if you read your book while writing it. just saying

😀 👍 👍 Thanks for the Work

Thanks for The Chapter .

Thx. . .