Comments of chapter undefined of Murim Recurve
Murim Recurve
Overlord_Venus
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Do my eyes deceive me? They do not, because one can expect such quality from Overlord_Venus! Such finesse in this one chapter and an amazing start! While I was initially surprised at the atmosphere first being created of the beautiful nature and that of a sparrow flying, as some skimming readers do, you wrapped and tied up all the details and made it into a beautiful, sorrowful piece. Every little detail made sense and you made me empathize with a Master on his death bed in one chapter. Now one can only await if Re'Kha can fulfill her vow to the heavens. Thank you for the chapter and the two years of careful thought into this~
Oh wow I started reading this on a whim while I was looking through WN and I can't believe I missed this ! Although we're just at Ch. 1 I already love the set-up and the terms/names used. It definitly feels like a higher quality than is common on WN. I'm very excited to read what will happen next so big thumbs up for the author. [img=recommend]
It's a nice attempt at a first chapter, but I strongly feel that it needs cleaning up and rewriting. The descriptions are really nice, but aren't structured as well as they could be, and need to flow better. The author also needs to clearly signal the difference between more important and less important details.
