Comments of chapter undefined of Game Of Thrones: A Knight's tale.18+

this story is interesting, but it could use a proof reader or maybe use grammarly because the writing is a litter hard to rea.

The novel is find but the lack of paragraphs makes it horrible to read just space it out more

I’d recommend downloading the grammarly keyboard app. It’ll correct a lot of these errors for you that take away from the quality of your writing.

run this through autocorrect or something please this hurts

like these guys said, try to improve the grammar, your novel had good potential and this grammar may turn off many of them from keep reading it.

moooooorrrrrreeee

one problem I notice with how they greet knights and lords in alot of fan fics not just about ASOIAF / GOT is he says my lord, he is not a lord but a knight he would say sir with his name sir jamie for example, as for Ed stark he would say lord stark or if he knew him lord eddard you would only say my lord if you are swarn to him is my point.

oh ... the first explanations (at least some) ... it's good that they appeared ... I hope that further he will tell how he looks (so far he has only described vaguely and badly)

when one think he is the player/gamer and others are NPC. nothing stopping him from killing, looting, raiding, destroying anything, literally

Good start, but thank God I have a personal auto correct in my brain thanks to reading alot of novels. Needs an editor.

phew this is just terrible....

wish he got storage.. keep all the loots

thanks for the really great chapter

Reading!

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter