Comments of chapter undefined of Inhuman Warlock

please lower the chapter pricing! its killing me

I don’t normally comment on the direction a novel is going, but because it is becoming harder to stick with this novel, and while it is still being written, I thought I’d share some feedback. It is becoming harder and harder to follow this MC as his lack of value on any human connection makes him difficult to relate to. I understand his difficult past made building connections to others challenging, but usually by now, the MC would have made some progress in forming significant relationships with at least a few people. Don’t get me wrong, I enjoy how carefree the MC is with deciding to eliminate enemies; however, his lack of empathy for the losses of his allies is disconcerting. The author spends a great deal of time to introduce us to new environments that provide an abundance of story arc opportunities, but besides collecting stones, the MC seems to have no interest in interacting/exploring in these new places. I felt that Amelia provided an excellent opportunity to allow the MC to start growing emotional connections, but that was disappointingly denied. If the MCs main goal is to get stronger at the expense of anyone and everyone, I find little value in hoping for his success. I think that if an MC doesn’t have people close to him to celebrate his successes, what’s the point of the journey. I also think that the MCs naivety toward personal interactions needs to be addressed soon as he has had more than enough opportunity to improve his understanding in this area. Anyways, I hope to see growth in the MCs and more significant personal connections, as I think the world he lives in provides so much opportunity for adventure that I’d hate to miss it.

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapters

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