Comments of chapter undefined of The Adventurer System

honestly you have talent for building your story world and painting a picture for readers and this comment isn't to put you down but you really need to get a better translator to work with the meaning of your sentences and a lot of the words you use while audibly correct are in fact incorrect when put into context with how they are used and the meaning of your words has been jumbled to the point where the reader has to reconstruct the entire sentence to try and make sense of it....if you can fix this then I would highly expect you to see more readers