Syal
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
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interesting start I'll see how the future chaps are
It is an interesting start. It would help reduce distractions if an English speaking editor did a review. Some languages have a different sentence structure that doesn't directly translate easily.
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
This first chapter is so confusing…