Comments of chapter undefined of Falin Saga

Thanks for the chapter

Nanyi and Weilong your are...

Obrigado pelo capítulo

Finally caught up-ish =w= The battle was fast paced and progressed rather well. The only thing I noticed was a slight explanation of reactions/actions mid combat. It's good material, but it could be better used in character dialogue, as a means of getting to know each other's abilities better or even gushing over the fight. Only because your switching views for combat enough already. Idk if I explained that clearly😅 All in all, great effort!

Im slowly being tortured here. I see another chapter and i cant read it. Im sad. I love this story now I have to wait for the chapter to be available to read.

It's a pity you don't continue with your previous series, but this one is also interesting. I can't wait for Nanya to finally start cooking!