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Comments of chapter undefined of Meteorite Jade Scandal

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Jinchusage
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This First chapter needs a rewrite, the order of, and/or the pacing set is confusing.

Zanaka
ZanakaAuthorZanaka

Thank you for the advice. I will correct my writing

Gojusensi_441
Gojusensi_441Lv4Gojusensi_441

this is so good but i am leaving it cause i am all over the place due to the names

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thanks for the chap

cohen_Mike
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