Gnaipafe
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waaaah.... the first chapter is soooo suspenseful, i can feel the quick beating of my heart and the need to rush when reading. Excellent work, gnaipafe! đ„°
wow, what a good start. It gives the reader a glimpse at what is installed for the later chapters.
EXCITING CHAPTER ONE I cant deny this gripped me
Well that was an unexpected ending The descriptions might need some work but good first chapter âš
omy what a start
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đđđ Oh... It is a nice, interesting and thrilling start... đ
exciting first chapter â€
nice work!
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that'sscary
yikes that ending
Nice
that was too suspenseful!!!!