Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated With The Strongest System
Reincarnated With The Strongest System
Elyon
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So disappointing. I was so impressed when the MC handled his plotting during the time when he is capturing the mounts. I thought we finally have a 'smart' MC that is actually smart for real. Now, the author actually pull a Deus Ex Machina after making the MC drop his IQ to 0. I was hoping that there was a UNO reverse from the MC like "Hah, you've fallen into my trap Carter". But no, bad writing.
I think William should give " Ian " title of first mistress in his harem, she deserves it, she deserves to love even more than " Belle " . Because up until now William sacrificed his life for his women, William (mc) sacrificed his heart in his past life for 'Belle',his magic powers for 5 years for 'Est' and now his life for 'Wendy' but 'Ian' is the only one who sacrificed herself without a second thought and gave half her heart to " William " (mc) .
sorry author i jump the gun i apologize my bad, i should have wait, my bad,however being saved by Deus Ex Machia is not that satisfying because it was pull out of thin air, instead i think you should have use some thing established like mama goat to help MC,we already know that she can help in the soul domain before hand and you can have both of them fight together which would be cool and you can said that since she is in a goat,she does not have her full power so when she and MC fight it not one-sided and you can have tension about MC soul slowly breaking apart,food for thought.(p.s. sorry author)
Can't say I'm fully happy with the development. Or no, it would be better to say I'm quite satisfied with the outcome, but not so much with the way it happened. I do like reversals. How things turn out OK in the end. I love my happy endings :) But I'm not too happy with how William handled the whole Carter incident after finding out about his candies. Put a tracker one some of them and leave it at that? And let basically all the "investigation" happen off-screen as it were? Would be happier to see him do some actual investigation, dig around more. And make better preparations beforehand. Be a bit more prepared, he did after all remove the effect on Wendy. And met with Carter. He should have had come to the conclusion that Carter was likely suspicious of him. He had been smart enough to remain untouched until now after all. And Wendy had already been targeted once. So why not assume he might go after her again, she is after all a weakness of his. Someone that can be used to take advantage. Who wouldn't, when the person they love is taken hostage, do whatever the hostage taker wants? But again, I still like how things turned out OK. Just not so much the damsel in distress part of it :)
Wow. Just wow.. That AN just hit hard... You are now probably my second favorite author I have EVER seen for novels! (sorry but I'm in love with the web novel affinity chaos đ đ) That note at the end really spoke the truth and I hope j can remember that for the future to come. I felt EXACTLY what you said and am kinda ashamed at that. You DEFINITELY just got another supporter that will spend a bit more extra money like I do with affinity chaos once I get back to work within the coming weeks. đđ
Well at this point I'm not sure if I care about any of these characters anymore. The author did an amazing job of building a world, establishing great characters, and growing the characters as they overcome adversities. Then it looked like he had an idea of where he wanted the plot to develop to, but he wasn't sure how to get the characters to that point. So we have a whole plot arc of lazy writing where the author contradicts what he's established about his own characters to squeeze them into the final form. I just don't believe the characters anymore. They're not the same people I've followed from the start. And don't get me started about how lazy a Deus Ex Machina plot resolution is. Maybe I'll keep reading, but at this point I just don't know if it's worth it. The characters I know don't exist anymore, and I don't know if I can manage to actually care about whoever this MC is who used to be Will
I know you are hundreds of chapters past this and will not change this but I am going to say it anyway. I hate Ian. I hate her/his character and everything to do with them. Tsundere types are liars that can't be honest with themselves or others so how can you trust them when they are even willing to lie to themselves? If you like someone you should be nice to them not berate them and ridicule them at every step of the way. That whole "if they are messing with you then that means they like you" stuff was made up to allow people to take advantage of others and should no longer be taught to people. I sincerely hope that in the future I get to read about Ian being brutally tortured to death by William but I doubt that will happen. Angry rant done.
I greatly enjoy it when a MC goes through struggle. Even when side characters die thats all good. It makes the story real. The trigger is your near constant use of deus ex machina. Bad situation, bam, magic trick, bet you didnt expect this conpletely unintroduced plot twist! Its not the story that is the main trigger. Its the way you resolved a 100 chapter arc by not using the previous 95 chapters of info. Its reading an epic drama that deflates like a balloon that triggers most and yeah this is your story, but maybe also think of how to improve no?