Elyon
I know this is an old chapter but I feel the need to comment, I have really enjoyed this novel up to the candy ark, the light ntr moments were a little painful but that's evey now and then, but the true problem was when William suddenly became stupid, the dean to, and the king, William had no reason to just watch the professor, and even less reason to not cure est and isaac, in bad situations its always best to plan for the worst, and you dont use things much less people as bait that your not willing to loose, and est and issac were definitely bait to stop the professor from running, honestly a large portion of the blame lies at Williams feet, he wouldn't have been in the situation if he had saved his friends and trusted them enough tell them what was going on. the king doesn't seem bad on the surface but he gets surprised way to much, how has his kingdom not fallen already, it's never someone directly working for the king that figures out the new enemy or problem, honestly if the king can't gather his own intelligence and defend his own kingdom then the kingdom deserves to fall. honestly the whole ark would have been way better if you just made a more up front fight, my only other gripe is you have been delaying will increasing his own strength for too long, the 5y mana thing was fine, but after he got to the academy he went to the dungeon only a few times, I get he is trying to strengthen his knight force, but he needs to get stronger to.
I'm kinda on conflict whether I should continue reading or not. I don't really care how he dealt with this worm, I just hate the fact that although he knows who the bad guys is, he still got caught by his scheme. he should have been more cautious, or at least it should have been explained more properly on how he got to this situation. otherwise, It just look like he just made a rookie mistake, which honestly shouldn't be happening based on how he deals with his problems previously. I don't hate death, but If all of this villains are rapist like in sword are online, then... I don't know what I'll do.