Elyon
TLDR at bottom + Question for Author-sama I haven’t written a comment for a little while, so this shall mark my triumphant return! *clears throat* ahem… This chapter uses the classic idea of “The Hero’s Journey” to showcase where this segment is heading. Specifically it is the “Loss of Innocence” step. Normally it is not taken so litterally, however for how our character is and acts, this is good character development. I personally have always been a fan of Assassin Classed people, so this segment may be biased slightly. Ezio is a very interesting character so far, and also sheds a small amount of light on the leader of Lont, Will’s grandfather. I hope that his assassin training goes well, but that his character doesn’t change too much, otherwise I feel that the story will be disrupted. Overall, this has been a great arc, and some great character development. TLDR: Great arc, Great development, and Looking forward to the next chapters Question for Author-sama: Academy arc yes or no? Just want to meet back up with the girls turned boys at the academy, and some stuff to happen. Keep up the great work Author-sama and have a great day!
Good chapter. Although he does look affected by death much more than he should be. The reason? Well he has even seen the cycle of reincarnation and experienced what happens after death himself, most of our fear for death comes from the unknown but not for him. Well anyways it was a necessary development so what can I say. Overall Good work.