Elyon
While he isnât technically an adult he should be more mature than his chronological age in this world. He does well at times but then he pulls the âdo you not poopâ or âshe has to be C-cupâ stuff and it reminds me of that doofus Mineta from My Hero Academia. Other than his juvenille behavior at times Iâd rather see him show off his maturity and intellect he has been an enjoyable MC. It makes sense that he would feel overwhelmed with the loss of his magic/mana, the ring and all that goes along with it. So this chapter really humanized the MC. Hopefully he remembers this pain and doesnât Celine a pass. Also, this could be a good chance for him to remember that he has people, like his grandpa, that can help him from training to advice. Keep up the good work author!
I ranted a bit and ended up deleting it by mistake But I'll just say this, this guy is worse when it comes to making decisions and I know you(author) are doing this intentionally Because any one who hears about the warning the system gave would never go through with still activating it. What if something worse happened like the crypt spawning multiple berserk bosses. Or if during transmission, some of his goats lost their bodyparts. He should be happy this was all that happened because it could have been extremely bad. And that's what anyone with a brain, who has almost died 5 times before becoming a teenager, would think. He's not even in that desperate of a situation
honestly speaking, for me, I am not criticising the book, I love this book but this chapter kinda felt weak. I mean he was crying because of a little set back of which he know is just a temporary situation. He has a good family here unlike on earth where he had no parent. He was given basically all he need. I dont really get why he was depressed. if it's because he lost his magic, then he should have been happy because this was a chance to fix his flaw which could lead to death in the future if it's not properly dealt with. if it is because of his defeat, then that just doesn't makes sense. and his mentality? he needs to grow up, he's getting worse.