PancakesWitch
I am just holding out, faithfully, till this kid grows up and stops acting like an idiot. In PancakesWitch I trust.
I do not understand why many authors decide to reveal Sealy to others just like that. I understand even when there are relatives or a childhood friend but the guy whom he knows for 4 days is serious?. I will not tell a person whom I have known for 4 days, even where I live. And most importantly in most stories, it ends well because he turned out to be a good guy, only a couple of times and hundreds of works he saw this opposite. It's sad in general, well, the story is interesting, so I'll read on.
It's weird how one thing can change how I feel about wanting to keep reading the story or drop it. I don't think telling someone he only knows for four days about his Secret is a wise choice to do. In chapter 41, he already told someone that feels way too early to be speaking about the System. I don't know if this is you doing this on purpose to make the story go faster, or you are trying to set something up, but either way, it gives me some mixed feelings right now.