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Comments of chapter undefined of My World Traveling System: The Harbinger of Death

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My World Traveling System: The Harbinger of Death

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Diana_Thompson_7235
Diana_Thompson_7235Lv15Diana_Thompson_7235

good story so far but uve noticed several grammatic errors. when referring to favours....its "owe" not own.... and "in a resume" the word resume is not being used properly. in the way the story presents, the character is summarizing the info she/he had provided the mc to that point. May I suggest that editor changes those phrases to "in summary", or "to summarize" instead?

2yr
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Venerabe_Yun
Venerabe_YunLv3Venerabe_Yun

So he asked to be his friend?, slow story plus stupid mc, why is he begging for friendship like that it's disgusting, this writer's behavior is ridiculous

2yr
10
SkeletonSama6969
SkeletonSama6969Lv4SkeletonSama6969

it's a very slow novel.... I'm feeling bored.

2yr
8
Lovelynovels
LovelynovelsLv5Lovelynovels

Really.. First day want her to dont bother him.. Next day want her... And this way.. Ahh..

2yr
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ils_8088
ils_8088Lv3ils_8088

wow you cant read the comments. People always complain when mc is not able to see the whole plot in a second and he is stupid the moment he cant guess the intention of every single move a person does. sooo annoying

1yr
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Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

2yr
1
Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

ThanksThanks

3yr
1
NewGuy
NewGuyLv4NewGuy

Thanks for the Chapter!

3yr
1
Kenneth_Mceuen_0675
Kenneth_Mceuen_0675Lv14Kenneth_Mceuen_0675

Thanks for the chapter.

1yr
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