Comments of chapter undefined of To Color Your Life

A small suggestion for the author. Please don't use Kat, Joyce, Catherine, blonde, photographer, etc., for the same person inside one chapter. When we're reading fast, it really takes quite a few seconds to comprehend that you are mentioning the same person. It really obstructs the flow of reading. Kat is just an example I picked. Also, either use their surnames or their first names consistently, don't use Evans once and Justin in some other. I know that this novel has progressed too much, but if you ever think of editing it from the beginning, please consider the suggestion. Also, a bit of an attention to the grammar would be great too. You can implement it in your other works too. Also, it's just my personal opinion about it. I hope I didn't offend you in any way. Thanks for the novel and your writing prowess. I've become a fan of your writing, in less than a day.