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Comments of chapter undefined of Monarch of Darkness, Arsene

Mandeer
MandeerLv4Mandeer

He forgived her a little too easily imo.. I think it would have been better if he gave his mother the cold shoulder and only interacted with the father-for even a short while. Definitely would have been better than this. Not hating, just some feedback enjoying the story so far.

Hamza_Sheikh
Hamza_SheikhLv11Hamza_Sheikh

well it's the price for his second wish

Ralle_Levin:She was impatient, the father knew it was too soon but she foolishly put her son in danger.
mbrapshT
mbrapshTLv13mbrapshT

I am liking more his ruthless extreme parents than mr. serial killer. Great so far

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

Kill your mother your father and brother.

GRE3D
GRE3DLv13GRE3D

too forgiving for a serial killer

Namikaze4aditya
Namikaze4adityaLv3Namikaze4aditya

how can he forgive her so easily 😴

Devilkr_17
Devilkr_17Lv1Devilkr_17

Author the mc clearly fainted for a year but now his mom is saying she hadnt seen him for a few years. Clarify and re edit the ch pls

Kenneth_Mceuen_0675
Kenneth_Mceuen_0675Lv14Kenneth_Mceuen_0675

Thanks for the chapter.

Biswajit_Nayak_6325
Biswajit_Nayak_6325Lv2Biswajit_Nayak_6325

Really a cruel serial killer and cannibal loving a woman who gave him birth in his second life well even if it isn't rational i accepted it but now someone almost killed him and he still cares for her i mean it may be the result of his wish but was the mother forced no she simply wanted her son to be powerful as most ambitious people do and no mother will ever want her son to go through that pain well most mother who love their son won't i can't tell about psychopaths and other people

calsion
calsionLv2calsion

this one emo novel

DoMinOOZ
DoMinOOZLv2DoMinOOZ

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Mrv4
Mrv4Lv15Mrv4

The switching from perspectives is infuriating. Either re edit and make it legible, so people know who is speaking or give up writing.

Argelicano309
Argelicano309Lv11Argelicano309

Se que ya es tarde para decirlo, pero lo dire de todos modos, deja de poner los pensamientos de los padres almenos que no sean relacionado con un evento importante.

MisterEditor
MisterEditorLv3MisterEditor

how can a big woman can cry on the shoulder of a 1year boy as mentioned in previous paragraphs, is it the world of giant although that would also be impossible as mother would so much bigger than child of 1 year.

MisterEditor
MisterEditorLv3MisterEditor

Author please clarify his Age ???

Hunter_er_mmm
Hunter_er_mmmLv1Hunter_er_mmm

Daoist7Zn3Hh
Daoist7Zn3HhLv2Daoist7Zn3Hh

story is absolutely mind blowing so far. feeling goosebumps thinking about future sort

Vitor_Lindo
Vitor_LindoLv3Vitor_Lindo

Mano porque todas as fanfic quando o cara reicarna ele fica ingal hum idiota emm (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ¯\_ಠ_ಠ_/¯

Noobamstard
NoobamstardLv13Noobamstard

Big Oof