MizA
The grammar is top notch. No noticeable error that could affect the flow of the story. The storyline is very good. The transmigration of matt into another body in the midst of a survival game is excellent. The fantasy world, from the first chapter, is full of magic but with a midas touch. The character of Matt is well written and likeable. So far. Great chapter.
Hi Miza, I love your book and your great idea about deities. Can you check out my book "Virtual Fantasy World" and give your opinion? I also vote for your book several times. I will do my best to vote weekly. Yonko master is my friend too. Both of us are new authors. I wish you the best in the WSA competition! Cheers.